Hey it looks alright to me, also thanks for linking to your review. I was thinking about checking out that book, now I totally will. I did notice one typo, you wrote frankly twice in a sentence:
"The first chapter, Myth and Reality in the Amsterdam Squatters’ Movement, 1975-2012 by Nazima Kadir, continues on this trajectory. She is an academic and her writings reflects that to its core. Systematically cited sources alone give such a wide variety of references for further research let alone other interesting side notes such as how her work was used in the Dutch cooperative sitcom,
Our Autonomous Life,
frankly frankly academics can’t make squatting boring."